Week 1 Parking Lot

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Week 1 Parking Lot

Post by Jax Paradise on Sat Jun 09, 2018 6:45 am

[The camera pan across the parking lot, showing various stages of activity as people go about their business. The camera zooms in on a giant biker sitting on a Harley.]

Jax Paradise: "I did not come here for anything you folks will understand. I am not here for titles, fame, or fortune. I am certainly not here for friends. Pay close attention over the weeks and months if you want to know more." The Master of The Apocalypse is here.

The camera zooms out and fades.

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Re: Week 1 Parking Lot

Post by Road Warrior on Thu Jun 14, 2018 11:29 am

I like this. I was thinking maybe you could write 1 or 2 more with the same length that can be air in different moments of the show. Jax appears says something short and mysterious about him or his story and disappears. I think this could also help build the story and the character.
This RP is intriguing enough to make people get interested in the story but taking in account its size I fear it can get lost in the show, that's why I suggest writing at least 1 more with the same format.

Let me know what you think.
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Post by Jax Paradise on Sun Jun 17, 2018 8:31 am

I will add a few more no problem

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